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11:59am
Panel 1
Morgan and the Boy are walking in a forwardly direction, there is little activity happening around them as they walk through a residential area, Morgan is asking him a question
Morgan: you know, I never did get your name
Boy: Ellen McGarthy, but people call me Elly
Panel 2
As they continue to walk, Morgan suggests something in humour and is laughing because of it, Elly doesn't think it's funny though
Morgan: well, seeing as you're a boy now, we can't call you THAT now can we?
Elly: HEY!! Watch it!
Panel 3
Morgan has stopped laughing and is now offering Elly a serious solution, He doesn't seem to be in a very agreeing mood at the moment however
Morgan: look, all I'm saying is that you need a new name for your new body, I'm thinking Garth
Garth: Garth McGarthy? no way, not gonna happen
Panel 4a
The view is from the front of the two of them as they continue to walk forward, there's a group of three across the street from them walking in the opposite direction
Morgan: Mickey? Mickey: no
Morgan: George? George: no
Morgan: Jesse? Jesse: oh GAWD no!
Panel 4b
Morgan looks as if she's given up on helping Elly decide on a new, more masculine title, Elly himself has a look of thoughtfulness on his face
Morgan: fine, how bout something stupid like Eddy or something
Eddy: no, I dnn-
Elly: huh, I like it
Panel 5
Eddy is making a bold statement as Morgan facepalms
Eddy: let it be known that as long as I'm ...ih... a boy, I shall be called Eddy!
Panel 6
Our view is from behind the two (slightly to the left) Morgan is pointing forward towards a house a house further down
Eddy: where are we headed anyway?
Morgan: hush up, we're almost there, it's just a couple minutes from here
11:59am
Panel 1
Morgan and the Boy are walking in a forwardly direction, there is little activity happening around them as they walk through a residential area, Morgan is asking him a question
Morgan: you know, I never did get your name
Boy: Ellen McGarthy, but people call me Elly
Panel 2
As they continue to walk, Morgan suggests something in humour and is laughing because of it, Elly doesn't think it's funny though
Morgan: well, seeing as you're a boy now, we can't call you THAT now can we?
Elly: HEY!! Watch it!
Panel 3
Morgan has stopped laughing and is now offering Elly a serious solution, He doesn't seem to be in a very agreeing mood at the moment however
Morgan: look, all I'm saying is that you need a new name for your new body, I'm thinking Garth
Garth: Garth McGarthy? no way, not gonna happen
Panel 4a
The view is from the front of the two of them as they continue to walk forward, there's a group of three across the street from them walking in the opposite direction
Morgan: Mickey? Mickey: no
Morgan: George? George: no
Morgan: Jesse? Jesse: oh GAWD no!
Panel 4b
Morgan looks as if she's given up on helping Elly decide on a new, more masculine title, Elly himself has a look of thoughtfulness on his face
Morgan: fine, how bout something stupid like Eddy or something
Eddy: no, I dnn-
Elly: huh, I like it
Panel 5
Eddy is making a bold statement as Morgan facepalms
Eddy: let it be known that as long as I'm ...ih... a boy, I shall be called Eddy!
Panel 6
Our view is from behind the two (slightly to the left) Morgan is pointing forward towards a house a house further down
Eddy: where are we headed anyway?
Morgan: hush up, we're almost there, it's just a couple minutes from here
Morgan: you know, my next choice would've been Elliot
Eddy: are you serious, EVERYBODY would catch on to a name like that
okay, so first let me say thanks to all the support I've been getting in my time of need, but I'll just say now that I'm better and ready to take on writing scripts again (though not as fluently as before, maybe once every other day)
anyway, now to explain the page before, after seeing the artist of Questionable Content redo one of his earlier pages to see the differences in his art style, I decided to do the same, obviously not for my drawing skills, but I feel my descriptive skills have improved immensely since I first started, so I feel the principle's the same
now, everybody's favourite page, #4 of Book 1, redone and altered to sound like I wrote it now,as opposed to 2 years ago
Here's the original page for comparison: [link]
Eddy: are you serious, EVERYBODY would catch on to a name like that
okay, so first let me say thanks to all the support I've been getting in my time of need, but I'll just say now that I'm better and ready to take on writing scripts again (though not as fluently as before, maybe once every other day)
anyway, now to explain the page before, after seeing the artist of Questionable Content redo one of his earlier pages to see the differences in his art style, I decided to do the same, obviously not for my drawing skills, but I feel my descriptive skills have improved immensely since I first started, so I feel the principle's the same
now, everybody's favourite page, #4 of Book 1, redone and altered to sound like I wrote it now,as opposed to 2 years ago
Here's the original page for comparison: [link]
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XD Oh dear lord.